Love the discourse re Merrily.
... And the book is just not good - a few lines of Furthian dialogue are funny, but it's melodramatic, arch, and finds no way to make us care about anything that happens.
Woody and I both saw :
Tom Stoppard's "Artist Descending a Staircase
which, like Merrily, uses non-liner story-telling. Stoppard may not get you caring deeply about the characters, but he does have you enthralled with finding out how they came to their present condition; you await with eager anticipation each page turned backward. Gimmicky, sure - but good theatre!
Screenwriter
John August (Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, Big Fish, Go, and Charlie’s Angels) observed:
Personally, I find that non-linear structure is often just a flashy trick to disguise bad storytelling, or worse, a boring plot. It demands that the audience pay closer attention in order to figure out what’s going on, but rarely rewards the effort.
As you pointed out, when we couldn't care less about the characters we meet in Scene 1, why wait for Scene 2?
The fault is not the conceit, but the execution, and here I agree with you, the majority of the failure should be assigned to Furth!
der Brucer