I am really overtired right now. I know I'll have to do some major smoothing out of what I wrote today, but I just was happy to get the three pages done - it's all there, I just have to move some stuff around, add some atmosphere, and make it a bit more fun. I'm dealing with trying to make the reader understand the geography of the location, and that is suprisingly hard. What I may end up doing is actually putting a diagram of the location (as drawn by the character) in the book itself. It would be one thing if it were a straightforward location, but what it really is is an "L" shaped alley and it's really hard to convey it clearly and keep north, south, east, west clear and also make it "visual" for the reader, geography-wise.