Oy and vey what a long day. I had a nice work session with Mr. Graae - before he began his final song, Muse Margaret called and I excused myself and spent fifteen minutes on the telephonic device with her. Sorry, but as much as I'm into the upcoming recording, this was about my new book and that's the conversation I wanted to have and I wasn't about to wait to hear it. She loved the new pages, and just had some minor little things she asked about - one was just confusion in a time switch, jumping ahead a day within the same chapter - she didn't realize there was a double space there to indicate that, but I've already decided that for this particular book I'm going to use what I did in the Kritzer books when that happened - this: *** between those sections. Not a lot of it but it becomes very clear when you're using that within a chapter. Otherwise it was a typo here a word change there, and again one bit of confusion where I had some characters who were outside and about to go home suddenly go inside for no reason - there may have been a reason at some point but whatever it was got removed. So, I just rewrote it quickly so they remained outside, and because of that I added a half a page of something really fun - I read that to Muse Margaret and she was thrilled with it. So onward.
