Had the phoner, which was fine, then I immediately went and had some bacon and eggs and started in reading and making notes on the latest draft of the musical. I was hoping that the last set would have been done as discussed, but alas, many weren't and those will all have to be addressed, but this time I was merciless and made tons of line suggestions, moving stuff around, a few deletions, a few necessary additions, but mostly notes about the intentions of my notes - why I want them and why they will all help the story being clear. And I came up with a great last line for the show whilst on my three-mile jog. So, I'm meeting Doug at ten and we will sit in a restaurant and we will not leave until he's written down every single thing that I've written in my script.
