Muse Margaret finished reading the final batch of pages - and thankfully she really, really loved them, and she especially LOVED the last line. After I sent the pages, I began to think maybe I needed to be a little more blatant on the set-up to it and wrote four variations of it - but Margaret thought it was just right and that we didn't need to sledgehammer it. I can now breathe easy and in a day or two I'll start my proofing go-through, and then send it the proofers for proper proofing.
