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Title: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 12:30:09 AM
Well, you've read the notes, the notes were long, long notes, and now it is time for you to post until the long, long cows come home.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 12:30:42 AM
And the word of the day is: HEGIRA!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:49:06 AM
Topic of the Day:  I'm not sure what's the longest that I've slept.  I know that the longest that I've stayed awake is 40 hours!  That was in college...and it only happened once. :P
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 01:28:39 AM
Have a good day, all!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:02:17 AM
Good morning, friends.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:02:29 AM
Thanks for the vibes!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:04:24 AM
I pulled an all-nighter in college to finish a paper that was due. The next morning, bright and early, I had a voice lesson. I got out exactly 2 notes when the professor shut it down and ordered me out of his studio. So evidently it was quite audible.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Michael on August 09, 2021, 02:22:21 AM
Good morning to all
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Michael on August 09, 2021, 02:22:53 AM
BK

The musical quote arrived. Thanks 😊
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 03:44:24 AM
Good morning, all!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 03:50:09 AM
I slept well, given the amount of leg pains. My bathroom cleanup really did me in. My right knee does not mot being kneeled on and I was on my hands and knees during most of the cleaning, moving the litter box and mats out into the kitchen area, and using the Dustbuster. Then I had to drag out the Big Vacuum, which had a stuffed tube caused by a large wad of paper that would not go into the vacuum's filter. I had to take that apart to unclog it and clean the filter. After that mess was cleaned up, I took the vacuum into the bathroom and really vacuumed the floor before I mopped it. While the bathroom floor dried, I vacuumed the apartment. By the time I finished and put everything away, my legs wanted no more stress.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 03:53:00 AM
So, when kitty cleanup is over, I will head down to Columbus Circle for those x-rays I missed on Friday. I hope there are no anxiety attacks.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 03:53:36 AM
DR singsaw, be sure your ENT person checks for sinus polyps. I still have to deal with mine.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 03:54:25 AM
DR Jeanne, if Annabelle could find work I would be thrilled.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 04:26:33 AM
Good morning, all.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 04:27:10 AM
Employment vibes for Annabelle.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Laura on August 09, 2021, 06:07:30 AM
Good morning.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 06:14:23 AM
Good morning, all.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 06:15:33 AM
DR LAURA!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 06:15:55 AM
No anxiety vibes for DR ELMORE.

Voice vibes for DR singdaw.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 06:16:11 AM
DR LAURA you missed post it as you typed it day!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 06:17:47 AM
Thanks to everyone for the JOSEPH vibes.

We will add it to the 2022 schedule as the August show.  I would like to just invite the cast back.....but it would be nice to get a couple of new brothers who could sing and get rid of some dead weight.....but that would be very hurtful.....we shall see what happens.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 06:18:22 AM
Auditions won't be until June, 2022......if I'm still around....well....or even if I'M NOT still around.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 06:19:51 AM
Oy. I almost said good morning again.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 06:35:53 AM
TOD

May 1980. I had just been on a six-month "cruise" with friends on their 52-foot sailboat which was, at that time, leaving the Yucatan/Florida/Bahamas region and was about to start down the islands of the Caribbean. I was ready to call it quits at that point, and left from St. Thomas in the US Virgin Islands. I flew into Miami and my flight to L.A. wasn't for many hours, and I just hung around in the terminal trying catch a nap here and there without much success. When I got back to L.A., I took a taxi home from the airport, and decided to lie down on my bed for a nap, whereupon I'd unpack and begin slipping back into real life. The lying down was something special because I'd slept nowhere but on a frickin' sailboat, and the solid bed was a thing to behold. That was mid-afternoon. When I woke up, still in the same position (I was lying on my stomach for whatever reason), it was late in the morning of the next day. That had to have been a 16- to 18-hour solid sleep, and I felt better than I ever had in my life, before and probably since.

Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: KevinH on August 09, 2021, 06:38:58 AM
Good morning!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 06:58:24 AM
TOD II

There was one other time that involved a glorious sleep like that, but this one was more like 12 hours.

Summer 1969. Friends and I had driven from Cleveland to Aspen, Colorado, for a couple of weeks vacation and attending the music festival. We were a caravan of several cars and we drove straight through, sharing the driving. It was about a 24-hour trip, way longer than it would be now because of only partial completion of the interstate through the Rockies, and whatever sleep we got in the cars was, well, the kind of sleep you get in a car. I don't remember what time of day we arrived in Aspen, but I will never forget the little single bed in this motel/resort that sadly no longer exists. The room was just below ground level, and the bed was next to a window through which I could literally look up and see the night sky. I wasn't used to how beautifully cool those nights would be, but the bed was made up with the weightiest stack of blankets I've ever known, and that first night had to be a good 12 hours of bliss.

I certainly attained some nice long sleeps following college all-nighters like the rest of you, but these two experiences were memorable for their own unique reasons.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 07:02:21 AM
Those are my stories and I'm sticking to them. I hope you enjoyed my little travelogues. Next time, perhaps, there will be a slide show. Please remember to tip your waiter.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:22:20 AM
Monday morning greetings!

The jackhammering has begun...
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:26:31 AM
And I am home in one piece. I arrived at 8:30 to find the elevator was out so I had two nice rides on the freight elevator.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:28:33 AM
Fortunately, I was able to get 2 very important phone calls done before the noise started:  one to the dentist about the tooth I broke last night and the other to the orthopedist about the tendonitis that has flared up in my left leg.  I see the dentist tomorrow and the ortho on Wednesday.  Just what I needed this week...
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:30:04 AM
I had a wait of arpound 30 minutes till I was called, and a nice lady named Alexis got a wheelchair and took me to x-ray. The technician was the same nice lady I saw in March. I was twisted, turned, and then laid down for the x-rays and then Alexis wheeled me back to the waiting room. My doctor had requested a CD of them, so I had to wairt for that to arrive before my second freight elevator ride.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:30:51 AM
And I had two very nice taxi drivers, so it all went quite well. And no anxiety or panic attacks.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:31:47 AM
DR Ginny, I'm sorry about the tooth. What did you do?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:35:41 AM
DR Ginny, I'm sorry about the tooth. What did you do?

We had BLTs for dinner and I think I bit down wrong on some crispy bacon.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 07:35:59 AM
DR Ginny needs a good 12-hour sleep.    :)

Oy.  Vibes for all of that!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:36:13 AM
DR Elmore, I'm glad to hear today's excursion went smoothly.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 07:36:34 AM
DR Elmore, I'm glad to hear today's excursion went smoothly.

INDEED.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:36:49 AM
DR Ginny needs a good 12-hour sleep.    :)

Oy.  Vibes for all of that!

Yes, but 7.5 is about my limit.  Thanks for the vibes!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 07:38:25 AM
So glad to hear that, DR elmore3003!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 07:39:19 AM
  I hope you enjoyed my little travelogues.

I did, indeed!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 07:40:53 AM
{{{HUGS}}} and ~~~DENTAL AND MEDICAL VIBES~~~ for DR Ginny!!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 07:41:42 AM
~~~GOOD TEST OUTCOME VIBES~~~ for DR elmore3003 as well!!!!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 07:46:14 AM
My medical appointment this morning was interesting.

They sprayed a numbing agent up my nose, then inserted a scope which snaked down until the doctor was able to see my vocal folds. I decided to watch along on the screen - I mean, why not?  It was a bit unpleasant; like an extended COVID test.

In any case, the good news is: no tumors, abrasions, swelling, or other impediments on my vocal cords. They're moving fine. So no surgery required.

The doctor is recommending vocal therapy, with which she has seen positive results. This is hospital-based. Probably a minimum of 4 sessions, and exercises to do at home, of course. So they'll schedule that. I wonder if it will be a ruinous cost.

Anyway, I'm relieved that it's nothing more serious.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 07:47:12 AM
Oh my DR GINNY.  Well we all start falling apart when we get into our late 30's.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 07:47:21 AM
Nice stories DR CHAS SMITH.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 07:47:36 AM
DR ELMORE aren't we all just .... freight?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 07:48:20 AM
I don't remember a particular good sleep....but I'm hoping I get one this week once all the JOSEPH detritus is dealt with and before YOU CAN'T TAKE IT WITH YOU starts next Monday.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:55:39 AM
DR Ginny, I'm sorry about the tooth. What did you do?

We had BLTs for dinner and I think I bit down wrong on some crispy bacon.

Ouch! I'm so sorry.

Vibes!
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Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:57:24 AM
DR ELMORE aren't we all just .... freight?

We're all greasers in the eyes of God!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 07:59:07 AM
DR Jrand70, I'm sorry that JOSEPH is dormant for now, but I think having auditions in 2022 would be a good idea.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:59:26 AM
Oh my DR GINNY.  Well we all start falling apart when we get into our late 30's.

You're too kind, DR JRand...
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 08:00:04 AM
DR Ginny, I'm sorry about the tooth. What did you do?

We had BLTs for dinner and I think I bit down wrong on some crispy bacon.

Ouch! I'm so sorry.

Vibes!
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Thanks, dear DR Elmore - same to you!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 08:05:15 AM
.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 08:23:30 AM
 :D
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 08:36:43 AM
From DR Singdaw:

Quote
DR George, I think this should be the design of your sister's next chicken coop:

That is great :))
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 08:37:37 AM
VOICE VIBES FOR DR SINGDAW!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 08:43:56 AM
Monday morning greetings!

The jackhammering has begun...

I hate that sound.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 08:45:27 AM
My medical appointment this morning was interesting.

They sprayed a numbing agent up my nose, then inserted a scope which snaked down until the doctor was able to see my vocal folds. I decided to watch along on the screen - I mean, why not?  It was a bit unpleasant; like an extended COVID test.

In any case, the good news is: no tumors, abrasions, swelling, or other impediments on my vocal cords. They're moving fine. So no surgery required.

The doctor is recommending vocal therapy, with which she has seen positive results. This is hospital-based. Probably a minimum of 4 sessions, and exercises to do at home, of course. So they'll schedule that. I wonder if it will be a ruinous cost.

Anyway, I'm relieved that it's nothing more serious.

Good news and I hope the therapy works.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jennifer on August 09, 2021, 09:04:26 AM
DR Jane I mostly bike on bike paths. And I have the problem of people who like to walk on them.  Sorry but if there is a sidewalk then use it. And if you are walking on a bike path then be aware when a bike is coming AND MOVE.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jennifer on August 09, 2021, 09:05:26 AM
Vibes for everybody who needs them. !~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 09:29:42 AM
Our walking path is also used as a bike bath, including when we are on the sidewalk.  We try to be careful but I can't always hear them until they race past just inches from my body.

The two bikers hogging the road were in the middle of the street and new we were driving behind them.

I have no doubt you are polite when riding your bike.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jrand74 on August 09, 2021, 10:35:40 AM
That's pretty good DR CHAS SMITH.
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Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 10:50:05 AM
 :)
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Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 11:05:00 AM
That’s some crispy bacon, Ginny!
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Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 11:05:56 AM
We’re getting some rain today.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:09:51 PM
Fortunately, I was able to get 2 very important phone calls done before the noise started:  one to the dentist about the tooth I broke last night and the other to the orthopedist about the tendonitis that has flared up in my left leg.  I see the dentist tomorrow and the ortho on Wednesday.  Just what I needed this week...

~~~Tooth and Tendonitis Vibes for Ginny!!~~~
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:10:48 PM
And I had two very nice taxi drivers, so it all went quite well. And no anxiety or panic attacks.

Very good news, Larry!!
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Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:11:54 PM
My medical appointment this morning was interesting.

They sprayed a numbing agent up my nose, then inserted a scope which snaked down until the doctor was able to see my vocal folds. I decided to watch along on the screen - I mean, why not?  It was a bit unpleasant; like an extended COVID test.

In any case, the good news is: no tumors, abrasions, swelling, or other impediments on my vocal cords. They're moving fine. So no surgery required.

The doctor is recommending vocal therapy, with which she has seen positive results. This is hospital-based. Probably a minimum of 4 sessions, and exercises to do at home, of course. So they'll schedule that. I wonder if it will be a ruinous cost.

Anyway, I'm relieved that it's nothing more serious.

Very good news, Singdaw!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:13:32 PM
(http://www.haineshisway.com/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=6585.0;attach=12579)

:))
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Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 12:15:27 PM
:)

(http://www.haineshisway.com/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=6585.0;attach=12581)

:o

;D
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: elmore3003 on August 09, 2021, 12:22:16 PM
My medical appointment this morning was interesting.

They sprayed a numbing agent up my nose, then inserted a scope which snaked down until the doctor was able to see my vocal folds. I decided to watch along on the screen - I mean, why not?  It was a bit unpleasant; like an extended COVID test.

In any case, the good news is: no tumors, abrasions, swelling, or other impediments on my vocal cords. They're moving fine. So no surgery required.

The doctor is recommending vocal therapy, with which she has seen positive results. This is hospital-based. Probably a minimum of 4 sessions, and exercises to do at home, of course. So they'll schedule that. I wonder if it will be a ruinous cost.

Anyway, I'm relieved that it's nothing more serious.

Did he check for polyps?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 12:28:43 PM
I'm up, I'm up - about six-and-a-half hours of sleep. Something I ate last night was making my tummy a bit nauseous - I'm sure it wasn't the food at the club but perhaps was the little piece of cake I got at Gelson's on the way home, which didn't quite taste like it usually does.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 12:33:20 PM
Fortunately, I was able to get 2 very important phone calls done before the noise started:  one to the dentist about the tooth I broke last night and the other to the orthopedist about the tendonitis that has flared up in my left leg.  I see the dentist tomorrow and the ortho on Wednesday.  Just what I needed this week...

~~~Tooth and Tendonitis Vibes for Ginny!!~~~

DITTO!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 12:45:25 PM
Our Nothing in Common writers love the two new songs, so in they go. I really felt that the original versions were very wrong for the characters and weren't doing what they needed to do and at the reading that was soooo apparent. So, I talked through the first of them, the mom's song, first with the lyricist, who immediately started sending me new lyrics along the lines of what I said, which I told her not to do until I had the story exactly right. But she gets very gung ho about stuff. What I really wanted to do was have a conversation with Kerry O'Malley, who read the role. I told her my thoughts and she told me hers, which were excellent and from that the story became clearer. So, the lyricist got all that information and sent me a new draft, which was too on the nose and filled with statements rather than words from the heart and character. At that point, I told her not to send me more and that I'd write the tune first. I came up with a tune I really liked - simple, heartfelt, not overwritten, and no way for her to make with a lot of words, so it forced her to get to the essence of the lyric. So, she wrote to that and it got better - then there was our usual back-and-forth with my usual suggestions and by the end of all that, we had that one right.

The father's song was much harder. I absolutely hated the original - I wrote nice, bluesy music for it to match the lyric, but the story of the song was so wrong, so awkward, and came out of nowhere - it should never have been a bluesy feel and we were telling the wrong story. So, first I worked with the writer, who I asked to write a monologue about what I felt we needed to get to. He did, but it wasn't quite there and still had aspects of the old story. I knew I had to write the tune first - that always seems to work best with this lyricist, although we've done nice stuff the other way, too. And I had this really strange notion to take the tune in 1000% opposite direction. So, I wrote what I was feeling, musically, and it was really intriguing to me because of that totally different feel.

Then I felt we had to get to the essence of what it needed to be about and I had this thought rambling around in my head. I discussed that with the author briefly and he agreed with the overall thought and feeling I was having about what this song had to do and be about. I then discussed that with the lyricist. I told her about the tune and then sent it to her and she began doing drafts - and again, we went through our back-and-forth routine until I felt it was all coming from the character, rather than just writing statements that don't sound like the character. I think we did five or six tries before I felt it was telling the story and again the tune forced her to be succinct. The simple notion I had after reading the monologue was - well, there was one line in the monologue that said that the father's father was also a womanizer. That led me to that no matter how hard we try not to, many times we become our parents, and not the good side. It happened to me in a way, early on, and I saw it and stopped it. So, that's what the song became about - that that's a really hard chain to break but we have to and he can already see his son, the Tom Hanks character, becoming like him in the way he treats women. I revised the monologue and cut the stuff that was germane and it all seemed to really work.

And now, they have to do the other revisions to the script that we've already discussed, including a new coda to the ending, which hopefully will provide a better finish and be more satisfying.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 01:38:27 PM
  Did he check for polyps? 

Yes. Nary a one, fortunately.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 01:48:55 PM
That's a very interesting insight into the creative process, bk.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:00:30 PM
Our Nothing in Common writers love the two new songs, so in they go. I really felt that the original versions were very wrong for the characters and weren't doing what they needed to do and at the reading that was soooo apparent. So, I talked through the first of them, the mom's song, first with the lyricist, who immediately started sending me new lyrics along the lines of what I said, which I told her not to do until I had the story exactly right. But she gets very gung ho about stuff. What I really wanted to do was have a conversation with Kerry O'Malley, who read the role. I told her my thoughts and she told me hers, which were excellent and from that the story became clearer. So, the lyricist got all that information and sent me a new draft, which was too on the nose and filled with statements rather than words from the heart and character. At that point, I told her not to send me more and that I'd write the tune first. I came up with a tune I really liked - simple, heartfelt, not overwritten, and no way for her to make with a lot of words, so it forced her to get to the essence of the lyric. So, she wrote to that and it got better - then there was our usual back-and-forth with my usual suggestions and by the end of all that, we had that one right.

The father's song was much harder. I absolutely hated the original - I wrote nice, bluesy music for it to match the lyric, but the story of the song was so wrong, so awkward, and came out of nowhere - it should never have been a bluesy feel and we were telling the wrong story. So, first I worked with the writer, who I asked to write a monologue about what I felt we needed to get to. He did, but it wasn't quite there and still had aspects of the old story. I knew I had to write the tune first - that always seems to work best with this lyricist, although we've done nice stuff the other way, too. And I had this really strange notion to take the tune in 1000% opposite direction. So, I wrote what I was feeling, musically, and it was really intriguing to me because of that totally different feel.

Then I felt we had to get to the essence of what it needed to be about and I had this thought rambling around in my head. I discussed that with the author briefly and he agreed with the overall thought and feeling I was having about what this song had to do and be about. I then discussed that with the lyricist. I told her about the tune and then sent it to her and she began doing drafts - and again, we went through our back-and-forth routine until I felt it was all coming from the character, rather than just writing statements that don't sound like the character. I think we did five or six tries before I felt it was telling the story and again the tune forced her to be succinct. The simple notion I had after reading the monologue was - well, there was one line in the monologue that said that the father's father was also a womanizer. That led me to that no matter how hard we try not to, many times we become our parents, and not the good side. It happened to me in a way, early on, and I saw it and stopped it. So, that's what the song became about - that that's a really hard chain to break but we have to and he can already see his son, the Tom Hanks character, becoming like him in the way he treats women. I revised the monologue and cut the stuff that was germane and it all seemed to really work.

And now, they have to do the other revisions to the script that we've already discussed, including a new coda to the ending, which hopefully will provide a better finish and be more satisfying.

BK, we could be on page 87 is this was not all in one post!! :o
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:00:39 PM
;D
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:01:06 PM
But the good news is that my Indiegogo package arrived!! :D
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:02:59 PM
Hoo and Ray!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:03:26 PM
I'm learning new stuff for my job so I probably won't get to listen to the CD until I get home, but I might be able to later in the afternoon.  We'll see. 
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:08:03 PM
Hoo and Ray, DR George!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 02:29:34 PM
For everyone who's getting their Blu-rays and CDs - we really need reviews for the Blu-ray. Please do them. Elmore did a wonderful review for the Blu.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:33:46 PM
Time for a nap...
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:35:56 PM
There's something weird about Amazon's algorithms...   it's very hard to find the Blu page for Tonight's the Night!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: ChasSmith on August 09, 2021, 02:46:24 PM
The title alone doesn't bring it up -- and I'm searching in the DVDs/Movies section.

If I add "Kimmel" or even "Kritzerland", it finds it.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:49:42 PM
Thanks, DR ChasSmith.  That did the trick.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:50:13 PM
Have you heard about the latest conspiracy theory?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:50:54 PM
Moving on...
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:51:02 PM
FOUR!!!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 02:53:48 PM
Have you heard about the latest conspiracy theory?

(http://www.haineshisway.com/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=6585.0;attach=12585)

That's funny!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 02:57:03 PM
My Indiegogo loot has landed, too!   Lots of great listening, watching, and reading ahead!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 03:58:14 PM
What a Monday.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 04:01:04 PM
Thankfully I had excellent Chinese for dinner. Flat noodles with chicken, pork and shiitakes. Plus, shrimp-stuffed eggplant.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 04:26:23 PM
It has only taken a year but I FINALLY have an endoscopy scheduled for a week from Wednesday.

I didn't actually know that was the test I needed, just that my symptoms were getting progressively worse and I was on the way to needing an invasive test if I couldn't get them under control. 
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 04:26:40 PM
Two weeks from today I get to have my first covid test. 
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:33:31 PM
Hello, everyone.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:34:19 PM
Good news from Singdaw!

Vibes the vocal therapy helps and isn't costly.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:35:47 PM
DR Ginny, sorry to hear about the tooth and leg problems, but glad to hear you were able to get the needed appointments so quickly. Vibes the next few days so smoothly.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:36:46 PM
TCB, yesterday Larry posted a story about a cat that had a job and wore an ID badge. Thus my question last night.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:46:25 PM
I've slept 12 hours a number of times, but it's gotten far less frequent as I've gotten older. When I was in college a friend returned from the holidays and said she slept 3 days straight! I suspect that wasn't completely uninterrupted, but still. I've never done that, but I could relate.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jeanne on August 09, 2021, 04:47:40 PM
TTFN.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 05:16:07 PM
Two weeks from today I get to have my first covid test. 

Why?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 05:17:54 PM
Back from food. No envelope today - again I say, one MILE from Vitello's to the mail place. I am so irritated that they didn't hold the check as I asked them to. I have to bite my tongue about showing my irritation to the person I told TWICE to do it, but if it's not here tomorrow, well, no more biting, I assure you.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 05:20:48 PM
Two weeks from today I get to have my first covid test. 

Why?

Two days prior to the endoscopy.  I need the test to show I don't have covid before having the procedure.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 05:20:50 PM
So, I had a craving for Marie Callender's today. Back around June 15th, in advance of no masks for vaccinated folks, they had a big sign saying they'd be back open for indoor dining the week following the 19th. Today, I drove over there to find takeout only and a sign that said indoor dining was only Friday through Sunday from five to nine. I'm done with this branch forever. They are literally the ONLY restaurant that's not fully open and I think people are so annoyed with them that they'll ultimately close. You can't be stupid about this stuff  and they've truly been the stupidest in the neighborhood and right from the start.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 05:21:14 PM
First batch of CDs went out this afternoon, more tomorrow.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 05:21:23 PM
I am having it at an outpatient clinic vs the hospital where covid has spread between patients and staff.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 05:53:23 PM
I am having it at an outpatient clinic vs the hospital where covid has spread between patients and staff.

Oy. Covid-free vibes.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 06:10:17 PM
It has only taken a year but I FINALLY have an endoscopy scheduled for a week from Wednesday.

I didn't actually know that was the test I needed, just that my symptoms were getting progressively worse and I was on the way to needing an invasive test if I couldn't get them under control. 

Wow!  I've (fortunately) never had to wait that long for a test!  Hope it all goes well!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 06:11:57 PM
Gratuitous Post #111!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:13:21 PM
  Oy. Covid-free vibes.   

DITTO
for DR Jane!!!!!!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 06:23:40 PM
I am having it at an outpatient clinic vs the hospital where covid has spread between patients and staff.

Oy. Covid-free vibes.

Thanks.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 06:24:50 PM
It has only taken a year but I FINALLY have an endoscopy scheduled for a week from Wednesday.

I didn't actually know that was the test I needed, just that my symptoms were getting progressively worse and I was on the way to needing an invasive test if I couldn't get them under control. 

Wow!  I've (fortunately) never had to wait that long for a test!  Hope it all goes well!!

The year of covid, plus I was not satisfied with my doctor.  Once I switched things moved more quickly, still it took a good while to get into see the specialist.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 06:25:44 PM
  Oy. Covid-free vibes.   

DITTO
for DR Jane!!!!!!!

Thanks.  I currently am not concerned since I don't have any new symptoms that could be covid.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:32:26 PM
We're barreling toward the next page!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:32:47 PM
We're rolling like a stone that gathers no moss.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:32:58 PM
Down by the old mill stream.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:33:07 PM
One more!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:33:19 PM
FIVE!!!!!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: singdaw on August 09, 2021, 06:33:31 PM
Good night, friends.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:01:01 PM
Fortunately, I was able to get 2 very important phone calls done before the noise started:  one to the dentist about the tooth I broke last night and the other to the orthopedist about the tendonitis that has flared up in my left leg.  I see the dentist tomorrow and the ortho on Wednesday.  Just what I needed this week...

~~~Tooth and Tendonitis Vibes for Ginny!!~~~

DITTO!

Thank you, DRs George and Jane!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Ginny on August 09, 2021, 07:02:21 PM
DR Ginny, sorry to hear about the tooth and leg problems, but glad to hear you were able to get the needed appointments so quickly. Vibes the next few days so smoothly.

Thank you, DR Jeanne.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: Jane on August 09, 2021, 07:03:56 PM
'night
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 07:13:04 PM
Getting my reading together for the trip back. Got the rest of Stephen King’s latest as well as The Bookshop of Second Chances and Laura Hillenbrand’s Unbroken.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 07:13:27 PM
And with that, it’s time for bed.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: John G. on August 09, 2021, 07:13:37 PM
Good night, all.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: bk on August 09, 2021, 08:00:24 PM
Finished with my viewing.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:24:30 PM
I pulled an all-nighter in college to finish a paper that was due. The next morning, bright and early, I had a voice lesson. I got out exactly 2 notes when the professor shut it down and ordered me out of his studio. So evidently it was quite audible.


I guess I don’t understand this?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:25:19 PM
And I had two very nice taxi drivers, so it all went quite well. And no anxiety or panic attacks.


I am glad everything went smoothly.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:29:28 PM
My medical appointment this morning was interesting.

They sprayed a numbing agent up my nose, then inserted a scope which snaked down until the doctor was able to see my vocal folds. I decided to watch along on the screen - I mean, why not?  It was a bit unpleasant; like an extended COVID test.

In any case, the good news is: no tumors, abrasions, swelling, or other impediments on my vocal cords. They're moving fine. So no surgery required.

The doctor is recommending vocal therapy, with which she has seen positive results. This is hospital-based. Probably a minimum of 4 sessions, and exercises to do at home, of course. So they'll schedule that. I wonder if it will be a ruinous cost.

Anyway, I'm relieved that it's nothing more serious.


Great news, singdaw!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:31:22 PM
TCB, yesterday Larry posted a story about a cat that had a job and wore an ID badge. Thus my question last night.


Okay, now I understand.  I just thought you were having a flight of fancy.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:34:40 PM
So, I had a craving for Marie Callender's today. Back around June 15th, in advance of no masks for vaccinated folks, they had a big sign saying they'd be back open for indoor dining the week following the 19th. Today, I drove over there to find takeout only and a sign that said indoor dining was only Friday through Sunday from five to nine. I'm done with this branch forever. They are literally the ONLY restaurant that's not fully open and I think people are so annoyed with them that they'll ultimately close. You can't be stupid about this stuff  and they've truly been the stupidest in the neighborhood and right from the start.


Perhaps they don’t have enough staff to do more than that?
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:37:19 PM
Medical vibes for DR Ginny!
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:40:15 PM
I pulled an all-nighter in college to finish a paper that was due. The next morning, bright and early, I had a voice lesson. I got out exactly 2 notes when the professor shut it down and ordered me out of his studio. So evidently it was quite audible.


I guess I don’t understand this?


 A three hour and twenty-four minute gap.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 11:47:59 PM
I pulled an all-nighter in college to finish a paper that was due. The next morning, bright and early, I had a voice lesson. I got out exactly 2 notes when the professor shut it down and ordered me out of his studio. So evidently it was quite audible.


I guess I don’t understand this?


 A three hour and twenty-four minute gap.

It happens. ::)
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 11:49:03 PM
I blame BK today!  He posted ONE BIG post instead of a whole bunch of little posts.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 11:49:12 PM
;D
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: TCB on August 09, 2021, 11:54:29 PM
I blame BK today!  He posted ONE BIG post instead of a whole bunch of little posts.


Then we would have had a three hour and twenty-four minute gap on page 57.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 09, 2021, 11:55:50 PM
I blame BK today!  He posted ONE BIG post instead of a whole bunch of little posts.


Then we would have had a three hour and twenty-four minute gap on page 57.

Well...that's a separate issue.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 10, 2021, 12:05:40 AM
So, I went to Target last night after work and bought two CDs that have bonus tracks exclusive to those Target releases.
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 10, 2021, 12:08:57 AM
One was Barbra Streisand's Release Me 2 (https://www.target.com/p/barbra-streisand-release-me-2-target-exclusive-cd/-/A-83490746), which has one bonus track:  "When The Lovin’ Goes Out of the Lovin’."
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 10, 2021, 12:09:19 AM
The other was Jennifer Nettles' Always Like New (https://www.target.com/p/jennifer-nettles-always-like-new-target-exclusive-cd/-/A-82788383), which has two bonus tracks:  "Not While I'm Around" and "She Used To Be Mine."
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 10, 2021, 12:09:53 AM
I'd never heard of Jennifer Nettles, but if someone is going to put out a full CD of nothing but Broadway songs (and not just the most well known "greatest hits"), she can't be all bad. ;)
Title: Re: THE LONG, LONG SLEEP
Post by: George on August 10, 2021, 12:11:41 AM
These are the tracks on Always Like You:

1. Wouldn't It Be Loverly
2. Sit Down, You're Rockin' the Boat
3. Wait for It
4. Almost Like Being in Love
5. It All Fades Away -- feat. Brandi Carlile
6. There's a Sucker Born Ev'ry Minute
7. Oh, What a Beautiful Mornin'
8. Anyone Can Whistle
9. You Will Be Found
10. Tomorrow

Bonus Tracks:
11. Not While I'm Around
12. She Used To Be Mine