It all went swimmingly and there's a nice show here - I made notes as we went, marked cuts including one entire scene in act one, noted some characters who need fleshing out and to be more compelling (a side plot), and two songs that need to change - lyrically just not doing the right things. Once we figure out how those lyrics should go then I can address the music. And right now, the ending is soft - it's the movie ending - but it just doesn't feel right here. All along, I've said that we should think about a new ending, a kind of coda and that's what I think we'll try, at least.
