Got the Muse Margaret call before I left this morning. I knew as I was struggling through about six pages towards the part where I stopped writing, that it just didn't feel right or good to me and that's exactly the part she wasn't happy with - easy to fix - just a couple of deletions and rewriting a paragraph or two to change the tone. And she thought I needed a paragraph prior to the one I begin with and she was absolutely right in her reasons for all of it. Aside from that, she absolutely loved everything else, which was the majority. And so, I revised, wrote a new opening paragraph that I'm pretty happy with, and sent to her. I'll wait for her call, and then I'll continue on to the next chapter.
