Traffic was moidah coming back to the marina. I had such a good time today!!! Bruce was his gracious self, hosting a gaggle of theatah folk - we read through my new version of Jewish Thighs - and it was great fun to hear "my" lines (having played ALL the characters) in the voices of the others.
Afterwards, BK spent two hours going over every line, every scene, every transition with me, making wonderful suggestions, mostly in the category of "If I don't get it, they won't..." and "How you just said it - write THAT!"
I always come away from these sessions so optimisic and with renewed enthusiasm. What a mentor to have. Anyhow, I have a bit of work to do - not much really - before we take the next step with it.
One other great thing today - Jolie - the girl who plays the YOUNG ACTRESS - finally gave me a video of the last time I put the four-actor version together, back in Seattle three years ago. Can't wait to put it on the TeeVee, after I get a bite to eat!!! Oh, boy!!!