I took a break and finished a motion picture. I also got a lovely call from Muse Margaret who loved all the new pages. She just had a couple of one-word little things and asked me to think about adding one little sentence to one paragraph, which I will when I think of the right thing. Also, just one little addition to something new I'd done that she hadn't read in the first batch - she liked it so much, she wanted a tiny bit more description. But her reaction was so positive and she's so specific about what she loves, it's very heartening. She feels I'm being "guided" on this book and maybe she's right. I've written five pages but I'm in a hugely critical moment and I've got to get it just right, then I can move on and I know what the next two chapters are. But this one little section really all boils down to phrasing one line in just the right way. I think a shower will be happening very soon.
