Proofer two arrived so I went through all that with Muse Margaret, and then spent an hour putting in the ones we agreed with. There were some very good catches, including some really lazy writing, where I used a phrase about twenty times and not to any purpose. I do love and am known for comic repetition or repetition for style, but this wasn't that. I ended up removing every instance of it save for one, which I reworded slightly. So, I think we're just about done with this phase.