I futzed and finessed and wrote a new couple of pages, but something was not feeling right about this section I'd just done. I'd had that feeling when I did it - I waffled back and forth and finally went with it. But it explains why writing the last five pages has been so difficult - it just wasn't right, and it's also why I was having trouble feeling motivated. So, I went and had a bacon and cheese omelet and a bagel and decided to completely change the tack I was on. Thankfully, by rearranging some things I was able to keep a lot of what I'd written, but it plays so much better now without the encumbrance I'd put on it and it was suddenly easy to write because it was right. Of course, making that change means I haven't written any additional pages yet today. Richard Sherman is coming over shortly to play his song for the LA show - when that's done I will really buckle down Winsocki and write new pages and hopefully finish the chapter so I can begin on the addendum.