Back from a strong and fun run-through, our last in the rehearsal space. The first thing I did was fix the problem scene - we cut everything that wasn't working, and then I wrote about four new lines - really simple and very much in the character's vernacular and the writers' style - we ran it and it worked so perfectly that I almost couldn't believe it. We put it in for the run-through and everyone did exactly what they should have always been doing - teared up. Everything else, even if not perfect, tells the story clearly and concisely. And I'm jiggy with that.
