Heard from Muse Margaret. She just got home so she'll read tomorrow. But while I had her on the phone, I read all the little changes I made that were her suggestions - just read them to her and she liked 'em all and they do help and it's amazing how a few small things just add that little extra something. I don't even think it took twenty minutes to make the changes. But it was good for her to know what they are because a few of them are then used later in the book and she wouldn't have understood otherwise.