Turns out, Muse Margaret had a crazy day yesterday and didn't read the pages. Then I realized I didn't start on the correct page so she was missing the first twenty-five pages. I redid the PDF and sent again. She'd just finished reading what I'd sent, then went back and read the twenty-five she hadn't seen. She loved everything but the one thing I knew she would have an issue with, and I'd already bracketed those sections and I removed the - about two pages total. Sometimes, even though I know she won't like them, I'll write them anyway, just to do it.