I may have to go back to the location tomorrow, just to cement certain details I didn't jot down - I may take my camera, too. I've already begun smoothing out the opening of what I wrote. After reading it, it didn't seem right at all, so I added a new paragraph. Then, as so often happens, I wrote a half a line and could NOT figure out how to end it. I made about twenty attempts, all feeble. I then got in the shower, and within three seconds I had the right wording.