One thing I'm changing and, in fact, have just rewritten, is part of the melody line for the new song Doing Porn. David asked me to do it after the last reading (basically changing one phrase) because each of the first three musical lines is a descending series of notes - I actually sort of changed it, but then David said he couldn't get the first tune out of his head, so we left it alone. But hearing it last night, that many descending notes sucks the energy out of the tune and they lyric gets lost. So, for the first of the two descending lines instead of the final note being the lowest we go up on that one, which punches the final word of the first two lines, and then the third line now rises instead of descends, which gives the song much more oomph. Unfortunately, I don't think we'll be able to put it in for tonight, although I'm thinking about e-mailing it to everyone and seeing if they can assimilate it by this evening.