Back from clean teeth, a chili, cheese and onion omelet, and printing out the book for my first pass at proofing. I did the first chapter - I could see immediately that I was cautiously feeling my way through the chapter, and there were things that needed to either be cut or changed to match the way I did things after the first three pages. Really minor stuff, but very helpful. I'll run it by Muse Margaret this afternoon, just to make sure she agrees, but now that I'm past that first chapter, everything should be okay in terms of what I found in the first three pages, really pages two, three, and four.