Then I delivered the pages to Muse Margaret and then came home and watched a motion picture (and kept falling asleep). Then Muse Margaret called - she liked the new pages very much and had no changes save for one question about something. I read it and she read it, and then I removed it - just gilding the lily a bit too much - literally removing eight words, four from two different lines of prose. And that's that. I'll take a day or two, then Xerox the entire book and begin my going through it, looking for typos, repetition that I didn't mean to do, that kind of thing.
