Topic: KRITZERLAND AT THE GARDENIA 123 (Read 10044 times)

John G. · « **Reply #210 on:** January 16, 2023, 08:48:09 PM »

Eight.

John G. · « **Reply #211 on:** January 16, 2023, 08:48:18 PM »

It’s fate.

Matthew · « **Reply #212 on:** January 16, 2023, 09:00:07 PM »

Vibes for DR Ginny and DH Richard

Matthew · « **Reply #213 on:** January 16, 2023, 09:01:45 PM »

I'm all caught up now.

An email to the dealer along with a copy of the estimate for repairs have been sent. Rehearsal for Matilda went well.

John G. · « **Reply #214 on:** January 16, 2023, 09:24:21 PM »

Good night, all.

vixmom · « **Reply #215 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:33:41 PM »

Vibes for John and his hand

vixmom · « **Reply #216 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:34:20 PM »

Vibes for Matthew, whom I’m very glad to see back among us

vixmom · « **Reply #217 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:34:32 PM »

Vibes always for TCB

vixmom · « **Reply #218 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:34:46 PM »

And fir my dear Elmore

vixmom · « **Reply #219 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:34:59 PM »

I should be sleeping

vixmom · « **Reply #220 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:35:06 PM »

Goodnight

bk · « **Reply #221 on:** January 16, 2023, 10:47:40 PM »

Had the call from Muse Margaret - two calls actually. The first call too her to page 167 and she pretty much loved everything. She had a few tiny things and wants me to give a bit more time to some secondary characters - minor stuff, which I can do easily at some point. The second call she sounded really tired and she had one issue that I'd been fearing but she didn't want me to do anything until she read it again in the morning when she's not tired. But I went through those pages and I was feeling what she's feeling when I wrote them, so I highlighted in yellow about two pages of potential cuts which I think will fix it all - I think she'll agree. But while I was doing that, I had a real breakthrough about the rest of the book and I think it's really good and I'll run it by her when she calls. It solves several problems I was concerned about and will make everything work better in the final sixty or so pages.

TCB · « **Reply #222 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:28:57 PM »

Quote from: Ginny on January 16, 2023, 11:12:52 AM

I did not stay last night and missed some excitement when, apparently, the obstruction resolved. He feels much better today, but will have laparoscopic surgery tomorrow to see if we can find out what has been causing these episodes (of which this was the most severe).

Vibes for an uneventful outcome would be appreciated.

Most definitely!

VIBES FOR GINNY’S DH RICHARD!!

bk · « **Reply #223 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:58:55 PM »

Is this a bad joke??? No George. Really?

bk · « **Reply #224 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:05 PM »

I believe this is a bad joke.

George · « **Reply #225 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:12 PM »

So, my friend pug (artistic director for Theater Artists Olympia) is thinking about the next play that TAO should do.

bk · « **Reply #226 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:15 PM »

Not a good joke, but a bad joke.

George · « **Reply #227 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:31 PM »

At first, she wanted me (as treasurer of TAO) to just get the rights, but it required payment up front ($105/performance) and the purchase of five copies of the script.

bk · « **Reply #228 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:33 PM »

Oh, finally, one minute before midnight.

George · « **Reply #229 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:42 PM »

So she had me buy one copy of the script for now so that she can make sure that this is what she wants to direct.

bk · « **Reply #230 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:46 PM »

Go know.

George · « **Reply #231 on:** January 16, 2023, 11:59:58 PM »

Well, the script arrived Saturday, but I forgot to check my mail that day, so I'll bring it to her tomorrow.

George · « **Reply #232 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:00:09 AM »

Better late than never!

George · « **Reply #233 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:01:05 AM »

Quote from: bk on January 16, 2023, 10:47:40 PM

Had the call from Muse Margaret - two calls actually. The first call too her to page 167 and she pretty much loved everything. She had a few tiny things and wants me to give a bit more time to some secondary characters - minor stuff, which I can do easily at some point. The second call she sounded really tired and she had one issue that I'd been fearing but she didn't want me to do anything until she read it again in the morning when she's not tired. But I went through those pages and I was feeling what she's feeling when I wrote them, so I highlighted in yellow about two pages of potential cuts which I think will fix it all - I think she'll agree. But while I was doing that, I had a real breakthrough about the rest of the book and I think it's really good and I'll run it by her when she calls. It solves several problems I was concerned about and will make everything work better in the final sixty or so pages.

And if you broke monologs like this into smaller chunks (like I just did), we could be on page 17 by now!

George · « **Reply #234 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:01:48 AM »

George · « **Reply #235 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:03:14 AM »

My desktop computer was running kinda slow, so, for the first time in quite a while, I'm clearing the cache and browsing history to hopefully speed it up.

George · « **Reply #236 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:03:38 AM »

THAT is also taking QUITE a while!

bk · « **Reply #237 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:03:38 AM »

New notes are up.

TCB · « **Reply #238 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:03:45 AM »

29 years ago, this night, I came home from karaoke you find my answering machine, flashing red or iMessage. We all remember those machines. Don’t worry even though I knew I was expecting a call from my mom who I’ve been leaving messages for all day, and my sister regular messages went back-and-forth all day while we drive to arrange having lunch with my mom the next day and Martin Luther King birthday. And yet when I saw the red flashing light, my body went cold my legs were like ice.

bk · « **Reply #239 on:** January 17, 2023, 12:03:55 AM »

Up are new notes.

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