I read through what I'd written and the chronology changes and I was very pleased with all of it, just smoothing out a few things. So, I printed out the redo, Xeroxed the pages, and delivered them to muse Margaret's ever-lovin' Richard. She may not get to them tonight, as they're having company. If not, I'm sure she'll read them tomorrow and we'll talk in the evening. While I was talking to Richard, another funny story came back to me, just a short anecdote about a commercial I did. I just wrote it - about a page long - and when I read through the book next week, if I find a place for it I'll stick it in. It's not really germane to anything, but it's fun.