Talked to Muse Margaret and explained why I thought what I'd added yesterday didn't work - out of character. I totally understood why she wanted it, but I simply think she doesn't have any of the fixed pages from part one where all this stuff was addressed. And this just wasn't the place to put it anyway. But in looking at it I realized I just needed to make a further cut - about a third of a page. I told her what that would be and it really solved her problem and so I sent the cut to the proofers.