Margaret finished reading the new pages and liked them very much. But, she had a real problem with one aspect of the ending. At first, if I was going to address it, it would have required the removal of one short chapter, and about five new pages for the last chapter. But, in talking through it, I think we came up with a way to have it be not problematic for her without changing anything but about four paragraphs, so that's what I'll do first to see if it works better for her. I think it will solve her small problem, which I don't entirely disagree with.
Her one other note was about a character earlier in the book, and that note I completely agree with and I'll be adding two or three things to make that character's deal stronger.