Went and had a Chinese chicken salad and a bagel, then finished proofing the book. I ran two changes past the Muse and she was fine with them. One involved restructuring the order of paragraphs on one page to make things smoother and clearer (and I rewrote on line, too) and the other involved a small addition of a new sentence. I'm really happy with this book - at this point I don't even remember writing it - it's just a book I'm reading now. It made me laugh and as Muse Margaret said, it is ultimately touching, something I wasn't planning on at all.