Bruce posted late last night
Quote from: DERBRUCER on Today at 12:08:48am
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Biography:
Bruce Kimmel has had a long and varied career. He wrote, directed and starred in the cult movie hit, The First Nudie Musical. He performed those same duties on his second film The Creature Wasn't Nice (a.k.a. Naked Space), with Leslie Nielsen, Cindy Williams and Patrick Macnee. He also co-created the story for the hit film, The Faculty, directed by Robert Rodriguez.
COMMENT: In the second sentence you set off “The First Nudie Musical” with a comma; in the thirs sentence, you do not set off “The Creature Wasn’t Nice” with a comma. I would prefer a comma before “the Creature….”.
In the second sentence, I would prefer the alternate spelling of the word "thirs" - "third".
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NOTES:
• Bruce has his own website that he blogs every day.
www.haineshisway.com Also the Bruce Kimmel tribute site
www.brucekimmel.comCOMMENT:
“Blog is not a verb. After day there should be a comma, not a period. Need a period after .com (end of sentence). Might try: “Bruce has his own website,
www.haineshisway.com, on which he keeps a daily blog and maintains a dialog with his cyber friends. There is also a Bruce Kimmel tribute site,
www.brucekinnel.com.” I rather not change the name of my website. I think I will keep it
www.brucekimmel.comBut thank you for contributions. It interesting when I went back to make some of the corrections the problems weren't there!!
AGAIN THANK YOU TO ALL THOSE THAT HELPED!!!!!!!!!!